DETECTIVE ABEL PRICE
Nobody's First Choice
“I’m
close to solving it!”
The four living members of the
Nathanson family did not even acknowledge the detective’s pronouncement. They had heard these same words countless
times over the last two days; for they had been forced to sit in the drawing room
of their mansion overlooking a bleak English countryside enduring a barrage of
questions from the man whose job it was to give them answers.
Not only that, but they had to do it
while enduring the putrid smell of death, which had become so potent they were
beginning to taste it. At least four of
the many windows had been opened to combat this, but to no avail.
Helen, the matriarch, sat motionless
in the same ornate arm chair she placed herself in at the start of this
ridiculous, two day investigation. Mary,
Helen’s eldest daughter, sat across from her mother fighting off sleep. Being the most squeamish of the bunch, she
had elected to turn her chair away from the crime scene. Mathias, eldest son of the Nathanson clan,
kept stoking a small fire in an effort to combat the cold February air. Little Cordelia, youngest of the Nathanson
brood, was where she had been since the beginning of the investigation:
standing over a dead body, looking down on it sadly.
And Geoffrey Nathanson did as one
would expect, lay motionless on the floor.
He was dead, after all.
Abel Price, detective on the scene,
stood up from his lengthy examination of the body.
“How wonderful,” a beleaguered Helen
Nathanson said through pursed lips. “A
detective is close to solving a murder.
Mary, be a dear and phone the paper would you?”
“I only have a few more clarifying
questions. For safety!” Price exclaimed
with a smile, either ignoring, or ignorant, of Helen Nathanson’s sarcasm.
A frustrated, breathy sigh escaped
the lips of everyone else in the room, save Cordelia.
“Mr. Nathanson?” Abel Price called.
“Yes?” Mathias replied in
exasperation.
“You are a hunter, are you not?”
“I already told you that I am,”
Mathias said.
“Are you also a fisherman?” Price
continued.
“I beg your pardon?” Mathias asked
angrily.
“Do you fish, Mr. Nathanson? It’s a simple question,” the detective asked
in a less than patient manner himself.
“Not often, but every now and then,”
Mathias replied.
“Have you ever gutted a fish?” Abel
asked.
“Once or twice,” a visibly angry
Mathias replied.
“Very good. What is your hunting weapon of choice?” Price
pressed on.
“There is no such thing as a hunting
weapon of choice,” Mathias raced to answer in a tone on the verge of fury. “In the wild, a hunter’s aim is to kill by
any means necessary. I use whatever
weapon is available.”
“What do you rely on most then?” the
detective asked quickly.
“My rifle and long knife,” Mathias
said.
“Excellent. Thank you Mr. Nathanson. Ms. Mary?” Price moved on.
“What? Yes?
Was I called?” Mary answered, clearly being roused out of a shallow
nap. She tipped her head out from the
side of her chair.
“You were indeed. You hired me to investigate this case. Can you tell me why?” Abel asked.
“Have I not already?” an exhausted
Mary whimpered. “I was told by my
father’s lawyer that, because daddy’s death seemed unnatural, the family needed
to hire a detective to investigate. You
were on a list of three approved names that my father put in his will.”
“Your father’s lawyer?” Price held a
hand to his chin. “But don’t you have a
family lawyer for this sort of thing?”
“Yes, but the family lawyer is not
the executor of daddy’s will. Only his
business lawyer can dispense his fortune,” Mary blurted out.
Helen Nathanson’s lips pursed even
more than they already had been. Abel
Price turned to her.
“My husband was a businessman Mr.
Price,” Helen said, as though answering the question in the detective’s
mind. “Having different lawyers attend
to different affairs is, sadly, a necessary evil.”
“But not, I would think, when it
comes to providing for one’s beloved family after their death,” Abel Price
smiled at the old woman. “Thank you Mary.”
“Mr. Price!” Helen Nathanson’s voice
was firm. “I have had enough of
this. Geoffrey was the father of my
children, and we all loved him. We want
to know how he died; the job for which you were hired. Yet all you have done is spectacularly bungle
this entire investigation. It is true
that BOTH the family attorney and my husband’s private lawyer need an
assessment from you as to the cause and culprit of his death. That is simply the politics of being a
wealthy family. But more than anything,
my little Cordelia needs closure. Now if
you please!”
“Forgive me madam,” Abel Price said
with a bow. “I am very close to being
able to give little Cordelia the answer she is seeking. I have only a few more questions…”
“You keep saying that!” Mathias
shouted from his post at the fireplace.
“How long does it usually take you to crack a case?”
“As long as it takes, sir,” Price
answered jovially. “I never give up on
solving a mystery. Even if it takes
years.”
“Well, I don’t have years Mr.
Price,” Helen snapped. “As it is, in
this frigid room, I feel my age upon me as I never have before. Continue your questions so we may end this farce.”
“Very well,” Abel said. “Mrs. Nathanson, you are a doctor correct?”
“Yes,” Helen replied in rote.
“But you have retired?” Abel
continued.
“Yes,” Helen said.
“Is it safe to assume then, that you
have an intimate knowledge of the human body?”
“I would rather not discuss my intimate
knowledge in front of my children, if you don’t mind,” Helen answered with a
glare.
“But can I assume that, being a
doctor, you know about different medicines?
Drugs? Poisons?”
“How dare you?!” Helen raged with a
tempered fury.
“You are over fond of accusing the
innocent of my father’s murder,” Mathias roared as he stepped in between his
mother and Abel Price. “But I will
suffer no more insults to my family.
Make your assessment and get out of our house!”
“I am just asking questions,” Price said,
standing his ground. “I meant no
insults.”
“Your questions are insulting,”
Mathias said.
Price quickly backed away from the
furious heir apparent who seemed ready to cock his fist at any moment.
“Forgive my probing,” the detective
began. “But this is my method. I realize other detectives, especially
Wallace Bentham, have a reputation for their brilliance…and their
showmanship. They can simply stand at a
crime scene and the answers they need just come to them. I am not one of those detectives.”
“You have made that perfectly
clear,” Helen agreed.
“I have to work for my answers. So I choose to focus on where those answers
can give me the most informationL: namely, on the stories that lead to a
crime. For instance, there are four or
five scenarios that could have led to the murder of Geoffrey Nathanson. Granted, each of those tales will have a
wealth of details I will never know. But
the truth does not require all the details.
So, armed with these pre-death schemes that lead a living man to being
poisoned and stabbed in his own home, I begin asking questions. Eventually, one answer discounts the first
story. Another answer discounts the
fourth. Until finally, I am left with
the most likely scenario that led to the crime,” Price finished.
“That is the most inconclusive
method of investigation I have ever heard,” Mathias said. “Why my father named you with the likes of
Wallace Bentham or Professor Podrick, I will never know.”
“What I do may seem inconclusive,
but asking questions leads to answers Mr. Nathanson,” Abel Price
explained. “And mystery breeds many
questions. Answer enough of them, and
eventually you get the truth.”
“Are you quite finished then, Mr.
Price?” Helen asked.
“Forgive me madam, but I still have
one last question,” Price said as he held a hand out in supplication.
“Oh my,” Helen exhaled in
weariness. “Very well. Ask away.”
“Actually, it is for your youngest
daughter,” Abel said.
Mathias vaulted forward, grabbing
the lapels of Abel Price’s waistcoat and shoving him back toward the drawing
room entrance. “You are a fraud and a
coward, and now…”
“MATHIAS!” the voice of Helen Nathanson rang like a gong.
“MATHIAS!” the voice of Helen Nathanson rang like a gong.
The only son of the Nathanson clan
stopped. Through gritted teeth, he let
his hands fall from Abel’s lapels. Then,
after a moment of seething, he turned to one of the open windows.
“Mr. Price!” Helen Nathanson said
fiercely. “You would do well to remember
that you are speaking to a seven year old girl who just lost her father. You will not ask my daughter anything crass,
cruel, or worst of all, meandering. Get
to your point and get to it quickly. Do
you understand?”
“Yes madam. It’s a simple ‘yes’ or ‘no’ question. And I promise, it takes Cordelia’s emotional
state very much into account,” Abel said.
Helen stared hard at the detective
for a few moments. She said nothing, but
her eyes scanned over him as though she were trying to read the truth from his
face. “Very well,” she finally conceded.
Price walked slowly to the body of
the dead Geoffrey Nathanson. The corpse
lay face down and was fully clothed.
Aside from the awful stench of decay, there was nothing gruesome or
grizzly about the scene.
Cordelia had, for the entire forty
eight hours, stayed beside the body of her father. Mostly, she stood over it staring down. When she was tired, she knelt next to
it. There were a few times she fell
asleep, at which point she would lie beside it.
But now, the little girl was on her feet.
Abel Price knelt on one knee beside
her. Cordelia did not move.
“Cordelia, I am very sorry about
your father,” Price said to her in the gentlest voice he could produce.
Tears began to form in her
eyes. She had cried a few times over the
last two days, but always small and to herself.
It was just as well. In the wake
of arguing adults, no one paid much attention to a little girl’s tears.
“I have a question I’d like to ask,”
Abel said. “But would you mind looking
at me first?”
The young girl turned then. Her face was tear stained and her lips
quivered; but her eyes were focused and intent on the detective.
“Thank you,” Abel said as he put a
hand gently on her shoulder. “Cordelia,
did you love your father?”
She did not look to any of the
adults for approval. She kept unblinking
eye contact with Abel Price as she answered simply. Surely.
“Yes.”
Then the little girl turned back to
her fallen father. Abel Price stood up.
“Well?” Helen asked from her
chair. “Are you satisfied Mr. Price?”
“Yes madam,” the detective answered.
“Did that obvious question lead you
to the truth of who killed my husband?” Helen probed.
“Yes madam.”
All eyes turned to him. He did not return any of their stares. Instead, he turned his head slightly and
looked down at the little girl looking up at him: the little girl who wanted
answers more than anyone in that room: and he gave her a small, sad smile.
“Not a one of you killed Geoffrey
Nathanson,” Price said as evenly as he could.
“All of you did.”
There were no gasps: no pleas of
reason. Just three pairs of eyes glaring
at Abel Price, and each glare carried with it the demand for proof.
“After inspecting the body I found
three things that piqued my curiosity.
First, Geoffrey is currently wearing a pristine white shirt. There are no stains on it. Second, underneath that white shirt are two
stab wounds, meaning the assailant changed Geoffrey out of his blood soaked
shirt and carried the body down here to be discovered in the drawing room. Third, around the two stab wounds are traces
of gelatinous, congealed blood,” the detective listed.
The remaining members of the
Nathanson family were all leaning forward in anticipation of what he would say
next.
“The idea of a random killer taking
the time to change the shirt of a man he did not know is, of course,
preposterous. The notion of a strange
killer moving the body to be discovered in a different room of the house is
even more ludicrous. It leads to the
idea that the assailant, then, must have been someone Geoffrey knew. Someone the old man trusted. Someone strong
with a good back. Someone, quite likely,
who had access to long hunting knives and lived with the old tycoon in his own
home,” Price said as he leveled a gaze at Mathias Nathanson.
Mathias said nothing, but he stood
near the window gripping the curtain with a clenched fist. His teeth were gritted again, and his eyes
were filled with rage.
“However, it was not the stabbing
that killed Geoffrey Nathanson,” Price continued. “The syrupy, congealed blood around the
wounds is abnormal. The only way for
blood to coagulate that way is with the aid of a foreign substance introduced
into the bloodstream. A medicine, for
example, or a poison,” Price finished looking directly at Helen Nathanson.
“The venom from the Russell’s viper
causes such coagulation,” Price went on.
“And it acts quickly once it’s in the blood stream. So mother and son, it seems, had the same
idea to kill Geoffrey Nathanson within, oh, a half an hour of each other. But still the big question remains: why?”
“Mother?” Mathias called out.
“Easy Mathias,” Helen replied with a
small smile. “Let the fool spin his yarn. He has no hard evidence of anything.”
“Perhaps not,” Price smiled back at
his hostess. “But the soft evidence is very
telling. Mary kindly let slip that the
family fortune is not already assigned to you.
Which leads me to guess; well, ‘guessing’ implies I am flying blind, so
maybe theorize is more the appropriate word; that Mr. Geoffrey Nathanson’s
lawyer requires my assessment before he will dispense your husband’s
fortune. On top of that, I’ll theorize,
that if any of you are found to be his killer, well, I don’t suppose there are
instructions to reward you with an inheritance.”
“That is not true,” Mary said
shakily.
“Oh no? Ms. Nathanson, you were the only player whose
role I could not figure out in this whole affair. Then I remembered; you hired me. I do not know if you approached the other two
detectives listed in your father’s will.
But I am sure that you looked into all three of us. And given my reputation for being nobody’s
first choice…” Abel Price simply stopped talking and smiled.
Mary whimpered in her chair. Tears were falling fast from her eyes. She quickly turned away to look at the
fire. Abel Price stood above her for a
moment and said nothing. Her whimpers echoed
in the silent room. None of the other
Nathanson’s made so much as a move.
Abel Price finally stepped away from
Mary and stood in front of Helen.
“I will deliver my assessment to Mr.
Nathanson’s private attorney and to the police.
They can carry out a more in-depth forensic investigation to secure the
hard evidence,” the detective said.
He turned then and walked
purposefully to the drawing room entrance.
He took his coat from the hanger and turned back to the family as he put
it on.
“Of course, I am certain you will
all try to cover up your crimes. It’s
very likely you’ll succeed too, given your resources and my reputation. But I am a fast runner, so you’d better
hurry. Good luck,” he finished as he
turned to the door and put his hand on the knob.
“Mr. Price?”
Abel turned back. Cordelia was walking toward him.
“You said we all killed my father,”
the little girl said. “What did I do?”
Abel knelt down to look her directly
in the eye. “You loved him, my dear. If I can guess: and that’s all I can do: you
are named as the sole beneficiary of your father’s will. He wanted to leave everything to you because
he knew what your mother, sister and brother were planning.”
“Really?” she asked him earnestly.
“I can’t know for sure,” Abel
said. “It’s just a guess, but I think it’s
a very good one.”
Cordelia nodded that she
understood. Her face belied no anger or
confusion. She simply turned and walked
back toward her family.
Price suddenly had an image flash in
his mind: a courageous little boar walking defiantly toward a pack of hungry
hyenas. He felt guilty. In a way, he had just sacrificed this child
to the three people who proved they would kill if it meant they could stay
wealthy. But would they hurt a little
girl? Or worse, would they turn her into
one of them?
But then Cordelia Nathanson stopped
short. She was only a few steps from her
mother. Helen Nathanson held out her
hands, beckoning the child to come into the fold of the matriarch’s arms.
Cordelia did not go. Instead, the little girl turned to the body
of her father and knelt back down beside it.
She put her little hand on the back of the corpse’s head, and then bowed
her head as though she were about to pray over the body. But there was no praying; only crying. Loud racking sobs filled the room, and grief
had finally come for Geoffrey Nathanson.
Abel Price smiled. It was not a mirthful or joyous smile. But it was thankful; hopeful even. He stood and confidently turned his back on
this final, tender image to leave the broken home of the Nathanson family. He would race as fast as he could to the
police station first and deliver his honest assessment. An assessment, he hoped, that would bring
justice to all living members of the Nathanson family.
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